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What an imagination you have, I love how Mia and Stephanie jumped in and stretched the chords with their legs. Maybe next time you could think about improving your writing with using punctuations.
Hi Ruby, I like the name Lego Stories. It made me wonder what would be on the next page. You have written your stories with quite a few characters. You have done well to keep them involved in the stories right until the end. I like your idea to have two different endings for the same story. I am wondering if you did the writing first or the lego building?
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wow how long did that take
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DeleteWhat an imagination you have, I love how Mia and Stephanie jumped in and stretched the chords with their legs. Maybe next time you could think about improving your writing with using punctuations.
ReplyDeleteHi Ruby, I like the name Lego Stories. It made me wonder what would be on the next page. You have written your stories with quite a few characters. You have done well to keep them involved in the stories right until the end. I like your idea to have two different endings for the same story. I am wondering if you did the writing first or the lego building?
ReplyDeleteI did nun because i was playing with the lego
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