This week l have been working on my maia poroaki. We have to writ how he feels and describing maia. it took so long to do it but really fun.
Wednesday, August 25, 2021
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Wow! I can see that you have thought very hard about how Maia feels on each page. He is happy and angry quite often. Can you think of other words instead of using happy and angry each time?
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DeleteGreat work Ruby! You have been VERY busy thinking about the story of Maia! It sounds that you really wished Maia had been a bit happier, but as you noticed he did seem to settle into a happier life at the end. Its good to see you have read the story well. Keep up the reading and awesome mahi!
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