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Ka pai, Ruby, for challenging yourself! Isn't it great to get through a struggle by thinking really hard and the accomplishing it! You actually grow your brain, when you do that. I am impressed how you managed to include so much information about Maia in your acrostic poem. For next time you might want to check that you have a capital letter for all the names, including place names and maybe highlight the 'i' in Hawaiki as you accidentally used an 'L' in the last line. Keep up your great mahi!
Hi Ruby, Lovely to read your acrostic poem, you have a great understanding of the sort of man Maia was, so I can see that you have done a lot of thinking about it. Well done Ruby.
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Ka pai, Ruby, for challenging yourself! Isn't it great to get through a struggle by thinking really hard and the accomplishing it! You actually grow your brain, when you do that. I am impressed how you managed to include so much information about Maia in your acrostic poem. For next time you might want to check that you have a capital letter for all the names, including place names and maybe highlight the 'i' in Hawaiki as you accidentally used an 'L' in the last line. Keep up your great mahi!
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ReplyDeleteLovely to read your acrostic poem, you have a great understanding of the sort of man Maia was, so I can see that you have done a lot of thinking about it. Well done Ruby.