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Wednesday, September 22, 2021

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4 comments:

  1. CharlieSeptember 22, 2021 at 10:25 AM

    all some ruby looks fun you should of put you place in your story and make it longer

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  2. EthanSeptember 22, 2021 at 10:28 AM

    hi Ruby I like how you said how fun it was

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 22, 2021 at 10:29 AM

    Hello ruby,I liked the way you put every think you made it sound so hard,you tought me that the little kide got the easy ones when the big kides had to do the hard one.next time you could try and put your placing.

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  4. JackSeptember 24, 2021 at 5:45 AM

    HI ruby maybe next time you could put your place

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